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Reading Australia: Peer Review

Hi Sarah,
This is a great entry. The main thing that stands out in your work is the fact that you subtly include a variety of human senses in your writing. Sight, touch, smell and sound. Through your description i was able to understand your appreciation of the landscape you described. It is because you noticed the small things such as the bird standing under the water washing its feathers this becomes evident. Also I noticed in your writing that there was a clear transition from domestic life to your experience in the bush, which is important to point out!

Arthur

https://sarahazzopardi1.wordpress.com/2017/09/20/blog-4-creative-describe-an-experience-that-you-have-had-in-the-bush-where-you-have-felt-that-there-is-more-than-simply-material-reality-around-you/#comments

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